Howdy,
Continuing to edit (and add to, write inside) the Jake Jones story. From chapter six, here’s what’s “new” with the novella:
“The league’s hot team.
With the hot shooters.
The Warriors were Jake’s kind of team. Flow and form.
Built into a beautiful unit, the team put on a show of passing and shooting with elite professional skill and style, and it also happened to have a handful of the game’s hottest stars, in all the National Basketball Association. Accomplished players whose game Jake enjoyed most put in the sweat. Dripping dedication. That was obvious. Their gym work showed, in glamorous display. Individual players and the team glowing golden-hot in games at that highest level. World-class stuff.”
—Billy
Reading. Wrediting. Living.